Harris Burdick Mysteries: Missing in Venice












The massive cruise liner was circling around Venice, now. Since, the tide that surround Venice are usually weak. The cruise liner can usually get 100 meters off shore with out a worry in the world. But on that fateful day the tides grabbed the mighty vessel and pulled    it towards one of Venice’s smaller channels. The captain of the ship who’s name was Charles put the boat in reverse. But the reversing cruise liner was still being pulled into the channel, smashing into buildings reeking havoc among those who lived n that channel. Then the tides pulled out of the channel and out to sea to disappear just 1000 feet of shore. Some say it sunk quickly but the only thing we know is its gone and every one on that damned boat is surely dead too.  

4 thoughts on “Harris Burdick Mysteries: Missing in Venice

  1. Hi Gavin,
    You did an great job on this picture prompt. I really enjoy the story you have structured around the ship, even giving it a captain. I like the mystery behind where the ship came from, as well as what happened to the ship after in fled the canal. You are a very strong writer and should be proud of your story.

    • Hi Victoria,
      thanks for commenting on my blog. I actually wrote a story off this picture in grade 5 but it was terrible attempt.the picture I have based the short story off is from the book the mysteries of Harris Burdick so if you want to write your own story off this go check it out.

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